Tuesday 7 June 2016

1st year of uni!

So i've just finished my first year at University and although not getting what i would have hoped in all my modules, i am happy with the 2:1 and 2:2 i got, and overall i think i have still passed - silver linings, i guess. This was one of the pieces i wrote for the module Creative Writing Strategies, a short story about a girl called Aly - based on the theme of colour and light in relation to the book Light by Eva Figes. It would be awesome if you could read it and tell me you think! I'm personally really happy with it, this is the sort of writing i really enjoy. :)


|| The sun rose against the raindrop smeared window panes of Aly’s room. The light was a mere yellow at this point, like the colour of lemon sherbet. It had been raining all night, Aly couldn’t sleep so had stayed awake, hunched over her laptop researching the best art universities in the country. She rubbed her eyes and peered at the alarm on her 1950’s-style dresser. It was 6:15am. Time for another cup of coffee, she thought to herself. She closed her laptop screen and made her way in to the kitchen, clicking the switch on the kettle for what must have been the 5th time that morning. She stared wistfully out of the window while she waited for the water to boil. The colour of the sky had changed now and was becoming a cornflower blue with hints of lilac still fading as the sun rose. The clouds were a pure white and were dotted about as if an artist had flicked their water-coloured paintbrush on to a canvas. Art was the only thing that made sense to Aly, colour and shape and light; art was her escapism. The kettle had finished boiling and made a beeping sound making Aly jump a little where she stood, she’d been in her own bubble looking out at the morning’s sky. Aly poured the steaming water in to her favourite coffee cup and swirled it around with the tip of a teaspoon. Even something as mundane as the froth contrasting with the almond colour of her hot beverage sparked something magical in Aly’s mind; colour seemed to jump out at her – even if sometimes there wasn’t really any there.
She wandered back in to her room cupping her mug of coffee like it was her baby. Sitting on her windowsill and carefully placing her drink down next to her, she got out her diary and started writing todays date. Most of what Aly wrote in her diary wasn’t the typical thing you’d expect, she would take it with her everywhere and scribble down anything and everything. She’d write about her favourite artists and what their work made her feel, or she’d pretend she was an art critic and write her own reviews. Her previous entry had been about some work of Claude Monet’s. She thought to herself, just like her diary which had mad scribblings and random words here and there, she always had to write the date without fail. Monet’s work which was beautifully blended and wasn’t the most structured of paintings, still had form and the compositions were always attentively thought out. That was what Aly loved about his work, it had suggestion of painting free and without too much study but at the same time had SO much of it that it made his work speak to her in a way that caught her attention more than when people were actually speaking to her.
Without realising she had been sat writing for nearly two hours, it was now 8:30am and Aly was rushing trying to find everything she needed for college, arms flailing about with paintbrushes in both hands, her phone between her teeth and one shoe still not properly on her foot. She shouted bye to her mum and sprinted to catch the bus which should have already set off four minutes ago, luckily it was still there. The bus driver sighed as she smiled meekly at him and swiped her bus pass across the scanner and sat down, still panting for breath. She gathered herself and started tying up her patent purple doc marten that she had failed to do up as she dashed from her front door. Being an art student, it was rare that anything Aly owned didn’t have a splodge of paint on here and there, even when wearing an apron she managed to get oils in places she didn’t think was even possible. There was a slick of yellow acrylic still slightly sticky on her shoe laces from yesterday, she noticed, as she did them up in a bow. Everyone always thought that Aly was a little wacky, dress-sense and personality, but Aly’s mentality was that if there wasn’t colour in the world then there would simply be no beauty. Hence why she always wore colourful clothes and dyed her hair twice a month, she insisted that this way of living helped her with her work, “how can we find the light in someone’s art if they live in black and white?” she would always say, it was basically her mantra.
The bus pulled up at college and Aly jumped off, speed-walking inside. It was 8;59am and Aly only just made it up the stairs to her art class. She shoved her stuff in the back computer room and pulled her ‘personalised’ apron out, as Aly liked to call it, though she was probably in need of a new one as the amount of paint on it made it almost a piece of art in itself. She got herself set up with an Easel and the canvas she had been working on, a piece inspired by Monet. He was her idol, her role model; she basically thought he was an angel. Since she had discovered that art was her forte and life passion, Monet had been her favourite artist. His work mesmerised her, it was pure beauty and had something so subtle and ‘light’ about it that no other artist could achieve. The pieces she was focusing on were the ones of water lilies and Monet’s own garden landscapes. She sat at her desk, which was by the room’s windows, eyes focused on the canvas in front of her. It was appearing to be a lovely sunny day and the light glared straight on to her work, making the soft and mellow colours pop. The creamy mint greens, muted violet, shell pink and the bright but not too bright turquoise surrounded by a dark and dirty looking olive shade, blended together, created such a luminosity that it made Aly start smiling absentmindedly. After a couple of minutes of admiring what she had started, she took out her paint kit and got to work.
She studied the picture that was clipped up on her easel and started swirling together the colours in her palette. There was a range of brushes on her lap, opting for a very fine one she proceeded to gently stroke the canvas’s surface. A bit of blue, a slight of yellow, a tinge of pink – every stroke mattered. Aly was seated next to her favourite spot in the room for two hours as she painted, painted and painted. Blinking, she swivelled her head around to see that everyone else in the class had already left while she was still sat there, although now with an almost finished piece of work. ||

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